Dear Superintendent O’Malley,
“Only our individual faith in freedom can keep us free” (Dwight D. Eisenhower) The Board of Education is going to make every grade have a uniform. This is not right because students should be able to wear whatever they want too. Students should be able to dress the way they want too. Uniforms wouldn’t help students focus more in school. Also uniforms sometimes cost too much money.
Kids should be able to dress the way they want too. Students should have an opportunity for self-expression. Dressing different is one way kids can express theirselfs. If students didn’t express theirselfs no one would be different. Students can be individual when having different clothes. That’s why at first schools didn’t wear uniforms. People that have different ideas about uniforms say that uniforms help kids work together better. Even with uniforms students still will focus the same as they always do. This is why students should have an opportunity to self-expression.
Uniforms aren’t as great as people think they are. Uniforms wouldn’t help students focus more on school work. Teachers say students would focus more on what they are wearing, but they would still focus the same as they always did. If uniforms don’t fit right students would focus more on that because the uniforms are bothering them. People think uniforms help students focus more on school work, But with or without uniforms kids would still focus the same as before. This is why uniforms are good for students trying to work better in school.
Cost of uniforms can sometimes be pricey. Sometimes uniforms cost too much money. Students sometimes can’t get their school uniforms because they cannot afford it. Also parents have to wash clothes everyday and they would raise their electricity bill a lot. People say uniforms aren’t that big of a deal. But people are spending more money because of this. Uniforms can be problems for some parents.
Being individual makes us different. Kids should have an opportunity to self-expression. Uniforms aren’t as great as people think they are. Lastly, cost of uniforms can be sometimes pricey. The board of Education would not be helping kids by making students wear uniforms.
Sincerely,
Shelby kose
shelby, you did an excellen job this week on your post. In your essay you could of expalined everything more because i feel that it was short and could of had more that you could have added. In your essay i think that you should've said things differently as if like people that have uniforms are reading it because in one part it could be affending when you said uniforms aren't as great as you think, but like if a kid that has uniforms and likes them might feel bad.Anyways i like your opening sentence on paragraph 1 and 2 excellent job.
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